The Creative Story Contest from the Chobots.net Forum has ended! Many Chobots participated and everyone's entry was amazing, but there can only be 3 winners and these stories really caught our eyes!
Congratulations to Eggs, Jhadow, and Swifter. You 3 did an excellent job in writing your stories! Let's take a look at their stories!
Eggs
The world of chobots had been around since 2008. All the chobots play each and every day. But little do the chobots know, that each of the locations on chobots, have their own life too. The Cafe, The Gamezone, The shop, They all have cho energy inside of them who keep them working and safe.This is their story. The cafe sat in cafe st feeling chuffed as usual, She was always the most popular, even in the start of chobots, She was always the most visited and the most loved. The game zone across from the cafe, He had also always been popular in the old days, the main way to get money, but he had started to get less and less people coming to his location, each and every day, so called the space racing at the cinema is becoming popular he thought he was so happy for the few people who actually came, yet he was so sad as well because he knew, one day that no one would come at all. Gamezone looked over at the cafe where some chobots where looking at the cafe “I love the Café!” Said an girl with blue chat. “Me too Eggs! It's my favourite!” Said Drytoby They both always stood next to the cafe. As well as many others. Gamezone suddenly felt jealous. Very jealous. "Come on Games" He said to his 4 games he had left (As the other had broken) "Get packing, We're going on a little holiday". As the sun set over the 3 cities of chobots, Gamezone did something that was unforgivable. The sun rose over the city of chobots and everyone traveled to cafe st, just as cafe woke up. To... Everyone was shocked. “Where is the Gamezone?” Said Eggs and everyone started to question what would had happened to it. Suddenly a moderator bursed through the crowd to see the gamezones. He said: "Maybe is we shout for the game zone to come back, it will come back! So everyone shouted As loud as they could. Until, on the far side of chobots, the gamezone (who was being invisible so no one could see him escaping) heard the screams. His powers to be invisible slowly wore off and a chobot spotted him and called the moderator, who moved him back to cafe st. Everyone was so happy Do not doubt that no one loves you at any time. Because you will always be wrong.
Jhadow
There was a chobot, who loved to help other chobots, but despite this he was unfortunately very clumsy. Chobots hated him because of his clumsiness. One day, he traveled to the famous chobots scientist to help him cure his clumsiness. Along his way, he helped so many chobots, from new to very old chobots, those chobots did not even thank him, but they tried to discourage him from going to meet the scientist when they see his clumsiness. But he kept on going. When he got there, the scientist sent him home. When he got home, he finally understood that he just needed more efforts, and the clumsiness is what truly makes him a chobot. So he just continued living, with or without the clumsiness.
Swifter
A long time ago, on a cold dark night, a Chobot named Swifter was splashing his feet through the puddles at Cafe Street. He looked down at his reflection in the puddle beneath him. The puddle rippled as the rain splashed on it. A drop of rain ran down his pale face and fell into the puddle below. Swifter dropped the pebble he had picked up earlier in to the puddle. It rippled and his reflection became blurry. The outline of something wearing a dark cloak appeared in front of him. Swifter turned around as the wind ruffled through his curled, wet hair. There was no-one there. A few hours later his grand-father clock struck 12. Swifter led in his bed staring at his cold, damp feet. He took a glimpse out the window in front of him. He saw nothing but the trees swaying in the wind, and the drizzle of rain splashing up the window. His eyes began to close, and he drifted off. Swifter awoke to a bright flash. When he woke, he discovered he was sweating. He got up out of bed and gazed out the window. He looked down after catching a glimpse of a bright light. But, when he looked, he spotted something he'd never seen before. Something he never wanted to see. It was a Nicho, staring up towards the window. It's bright yellow eyes glaring into Swifter's. Then, the Nicho dissapeared in front of his eyes. Swifter span around as a drop of sweat ran down his cheek. The last thing he saw was the Nicho stood in his doorway. Then, Swifter awoke. It was all a dream.
Well done to you guys! Here's your rewards:
- Eggs: 5 Days of citizenship, 3000 bugs
- Jhadow: 3 Days of citizenship, 2000 bugs
- Swifter: 1 Day of citizenship, 1000 bugs
Have fun,
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Wow. Swifter's entry really sent a chill down my back XD Reminded me of Slenderman, really...either that or I've watched too much Marble Hornets. Either way, great job guys! (:
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Musicmaker You watch to many scary movies? Lol
DeleteSure, I guess. But Marble Hornets isn't exactly really scary to me as other horror movies, but its way more interesting than any other horror movie I've watched. :P
DeleteI love scary movies. But maybe i'll try watching Marble Hornets sometime:P
DeleteYou should :P
DeleteCongratulations to the winners!
ReplyDeleteCongratulations to all you winners! Awesome stories and you guys deserved it! :)
ReplyDeleteCongrats to everyone that won. But, I'm a bit confused on why you changed the contest rule on how the people that went over 100 words would not be DQED anymore. That was COMPLETELY unfair. The people who actually followed the 100 word limit made OK stories. They didn't have a chance to make it better because of the rule. And then these people who didn't follow the 100 word limit, and made better stories won. Don't get me wrong, the people that won do have talent and made great stories but come on. You can't just change a contest rule, then end the contest.
ReplyDeleteYeah... I have to agree with Mcdonalds. I had to shorten my story because it was too long. But now people won with over 100+ words. I just see it to be unfair... sorry.
DeleteYeah. This is so true. It made me very angry... we weren't even alerted or anything. And BAM rule change. We actually tried too.
DeleteLol café was never the most popular in the start of chobots it was shop square i remember logging on everyday in beta and people would most likly be in coa mission or shop/show sqaure. Ha me and my little corrections i sound dumb xD. But my face story is eggs
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