Post by Thomas

The Civil War is a story I wrote a very long time ago – March 24, 2012 to be exact. It took months to finish the story, but I managed to complete it. It’s a very long story – I hadn’t looked at it in a while. I was planning to post the whole story on this post, but after realizing how long it was…. well, it would full one page! I’ve decided to show you the first two chapters! Let me first inform you what the story is about though….
It was a dark era of frightened days. The lands of Chobots.net and Chobots.in had never really gotten along, but it was soon turning into a full-blown war. Civilians of both nations would sit in their homes, fingers crossed nothing “would go wrong”, as many chobots described it. For one of these nations, the end was near…. the most the civilians could do is hope it wasn’t theirs.

Chapter 1: Rising Tension
“We are a free nation of Cho!” argued Daniel (aka Smoochict), president of Chobots.net and representative in the United Cho Union. At the time, October 10, 2011, Chobots.net was a new Cho nation, replacing Chobots.com. All of the Chobots from Chobots.com came to inhabit .net. Chobots.in was enraged with jealousy. Few stayed with them, and the Chobots of Chobots.net only went there to visit.
“Please. You’ve illegally stolen Cho. You’re just like Nichos!” shouted Monty, current president and also representative of Chobots.in.
“Like your land is any better than ours. Including you, two dictators have already passed Chobots.in,” Daniel responded.
“Attention!” yelled the Grand Judge, a mysterious chobot. “The land of Chobots.net is fine for now. I don’t want any further arguements.”
“OBJECTION!” shouted Monty, determined to prove his point.
“Overridden,” said the Judge. “My decision is final.”
Monty glared at Daniel. He knew that Chobots.net was a waste, and he wasn’t going to stop his plan to eliminate Chobots.net. He already caused a serious case. He didn’t want to go here, but…. he had no choice.
Chapter 2: When You Start, You Can’t Stop
“Congress. I come before you, to plead, a declaration of war on the mysterious and new-founded land of Chobots.net!” Monty spoke to the official Chobots.in Congress.
“Don’t be foolish, Monty. Sure, it is a different ‘volume’ of Chobots, but it is still hosted by the power energy of Cho. This would become a Civil War,” Congressman Gabriel informed Monty.
“I don’t care. They’re nothing. They have no army, and we can weaken them. They’ll be the Confederacy, not us! They will be the Rebellion, not us!”
“You’re not making any sense….” Johnson said to Monty.
“Declare war.”
*12 hours later*
“Good day. My name is General Garson. I am the general of the Chobots.in military since we weren’t ran by a practical dictator. Although you may not agree, we must attack the newly land of Chobots.net,” the general announced. Shouts rang from the soldiers. It was a silly plan; a civil war is the last thing they needed.
“Calm down!” cried Colonel Richard. “It is a worthy attack, and it will be the only one. Why don’t we just get it over with? Now, we’ll be sending two divisions: Garson’s and mine. We will win, and we will have them bow down to us!” the colonel announced. Soon, the army gathered weapons. The soldiers hopped in the spaceships, and engaged in flight.
*2 hours pass….*
“Sir, we’re enocountering…. us,” a naval soldier shouted to Admiral Aris.
“Impossible. Why would there be a rebellion?” Admiral Aris replied.
“No, these are Chobots.in soldiers. Sorry I didn’t make that clear, sir,”
“WHAT?!” Admiral Aris was enraged. He knew of the argument Daniel and Monty had, but he had no idea it would be taken this far.
“They’re attacking! Look out!” a missile landed on the Outer Rim Observatory System Chamber (OROSC). Admiral Aris contacted Colonel Muttski and General Thomas about the attack. Both contacted President Daniel about this.
“Monty! How dare he!” Daniel was angered. “Alright, you two lead your armies and attack them. They probably are underestimating our power. I will go before Congress to declare war.”
“As you wish,” they said. The Blue Suits, the Chobots.net Army’s nickname because of their blue coats, attacked the Red Suits, the Chobots.in Army’s nickname.
“Whoa! Is that…. their army?” General Garson whispered to Colonel Richard.
“I guess so,” Colonel Richard whispered back. “We weren’t prepared for this. Call a retreat?”
General Garson nodded in distress. “Retreat, Red Suits! RETREAT!” he yelled. The army backed away from the horrible battle.
“Victory!” General Thomas declared.

If you’d like to read the FULL story, you can go to it by clicking here. The thread has been locked to prevent bumping of the post, however, you are allowed to post here to discuss the story, and also in the comments section!

I’m also planning on working on further stories for you to enjoy. If you have any constructive criticism,

I’d appreciate it. Thank you.
-Thomas, Chobots.net Journalist.
(www.cppsgang.com).